I really like it, its well done and well shaded and I like the animation. I also love the lineart, and I like how you didn't just make it a flat color, you actually did some patterns, and i think that all of the patterns blend together really well, they compliment each other. I also like that you gave her some acessories and you took your time with it and did a good job. I also think that the colors chosen are nice and it's a nice theme, its nice to have a theme for an adoptable. i think that it should have no trouble selling :3
my first critic.
thanks for your time. X)
your welcome, I've never written one before, so it was a try, it was probably really bad but I did my best XD